Divorceville sucked. I don't live there anymore.
You have one extra syllable in the last line. It needs to be perfect. How about:My savings crater.
I beg to differ...doesn't need to be perfect.Don't change anything.just keep going and don't look back!
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You have one extra syllable in the last line. It needs to be perfect. How about:
My savings crater.
I beg to differ...
doesn't need to be perfect.
Don't change anything.
just keep going
and don't look back!
Post a Comment